Mum and Dad are people who have had positive impact on me.
Mum and Dad bought me a sundae with hot choc fudge.
They buy me frozen cokes plus 2 medium cheeseburgers.
They take me to the museum even though I didn't want to. In the end, I enjoyed the tunnel.
They bought my cousin a happy meal.
They are really kind.
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, December 3, 2019
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Hi Jasmine.
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you have chosen your parents as having a positive impact on you. I'm pleased you enjoyed your visit to the museum.
Mrs Bowman
thanks miss bowman i hope your have fun today
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Hi Jasmine,
ReplyDeleteYour Mum and Dad are really kind.You are really kind too.I can see that by them being kind they have had a positive impact on you.Well done Jasmine.
Trish Wakefield
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thanks thats lovely of you to say
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