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Tuesday, April 2, 2019

my weekend

2 comments:

  1. hi jasmine
    1. good job on adding detail in your story
    2.good job on putting full stop's in the right spot
    3.make the font easyer for people to read:D
    good job keep on going:D

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  2. Hi jasmine, I like how you put full stop in your story. I like how you did a good job and on your story. Next time you can put in I went to the pool and you can say I went to the shop to get toy.

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