I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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hi jasmine
ReplyDelete1. good job on adding detail in your story
2.good job on putting full stop's in the right spot
3.make the font easyer for people to read:D
good job keep on going:D
Hi jasmine, I like how you put full stop in your story. I like how you did a good job and on your story. Next time you can put in I went to the pool and you can say I went to the shop to get toy.
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